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How to write effective concluding paragraphs?



jajadiba 5 / 15  
Feb 9, 2012   #1
1) It is an important to be selective about the people we mix with

To end, in terms of relationships, we pretty much select who we would like to be friends with. It is different from family since we do not get to pick our relatives. Then most people would say that why not take advantage of this and choose to be constantly surrounded by 'wonderful people'?

2) Malaysians should take seriously the problem of global warming. Comment.

On the whole, I would like to suggest that all Malaysians should live a green lifestyle, for example, use energy saving bulbs and low energy appliances at home. Furthermore, instead of using a car which requires a lot of petrol, it is better to use a hybrid car. Besides that, give a reward for those who follow a green lifestyle, so that, they will be concern on the environment saving habits.

Any suggestions that can help me improve my English is needed...

Does anyone have the ideas to write concluding paragraph for these questions????

1) Through its awkward transmission times, Educational TV (ETV) seems to be missing its target group.
2) In an effort to promote domestic tourism, the government has implemented a five day work week for government offices. Do you think the government's objective has been achieved?

3) Unless students inculcate the reading habit, they will not be able to develop their critical thinking skills effectively. Do you agree with this statement?


EF_Susan - / 2310  
Feb 13, 2012   #2
It is different with family, since we do not get to choose our relatives.

ThenMost people would say that why not take advantage of this and choose to be constantly surrounded by 'wonderful people'?

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On the whole, I would like to suggest that all Malaysians should live a green lifestyle, for example, using energy saving bulbs and low energy appliances at home.

Also , instead of using a car which requires a lot of petrol, it is better to use a hybrid car.

Besides that, give a reward to those who follow a green lifestyle, so that ---No comma here.--- they will be concernedabout the environment. saving habits.

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Does anyone have the ideas to write concluding paragraph for these questions????

1) Through its awkward transmission times, Educational TV (ETV) seems to be missing its target group.-----Just as they're leaving for school?

2) In an effort to promote domestic tourism, the government has implemented a five day work week for government offices. Do you think the government's objective has been achieved?---I have no idea how this could possibly help!

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