Can you help me with the appropriate diction? Have I chose the right diction in this sentence?

Can you help me with the appropriate diction? Have I chose the right diction in this sentence? or how about the grammar?

In the colonialism, Indonesian people were prosecuted with much demand such as: money, tax, time, and crops. Later on, they had to convert those demands to be some profitable products which could enrich the colonial power. It made Indonesians accustomed to get those things as much as possible (the quantity) in what matters they did though in coercion on imperialism

Hello DimiarA! I am trying to give my best.

Can could you help me towrite a sentence with the appropriate diction? ('Can' is right but you can also use 'could' or 'would', it is more polite)

Have I chose chosen the a right diction in this sentence? (Have + v3 = present perfect)

or how about the grammar?
(You can not use 'or' to start a sentence)

I hope it can be helpful..
Keep writing! :)