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Rephrase text about research paper (sentences)



anemona 1 / -  
May 26, 2010   #1
Hello, could you please help me rephrase the bolded parts below?

The area where I want to conduct my research is vulnerable witnesses. The question I will try to answer is: What is the youngest age a child become competent to testify in court?

One of the purposes will be to determine what is the children' age threshold for being heard in court as a witness

Thank you very much

EF_Susan - / 2310  
May 27, 2010   #2
Here are a few...

At what age is a child considered competent enough to testify in court?

One of the purposes will be to determine at [b]what age a child could be considered a credible witness, able to testify at a court hearing.
Mustafa1991 8 / 369  
May 29, 2010   #3
What age should deem a child competent -- per se -- to testify in court?
deltroix - / 2  
Nov 29, 2014   #4
Rephrase a sentence in the SOP

'My grades and academic achievements paved the way for my entry into one of the country's premier institutions- XYZ College of Engineering.'
Problem is I came across this sentence in someone else's SOP. I have drafted my own SOP but unfortunately, I found myself using this line. I do not want it to be a copy and am not able to think of a better way to express the aforementioned sentence. It would be a great help if someone could point out a way to construct a new sentence with the meaning unchanged.
Modewap 16 / 70  
Nov 29, 2014   #5
Deltroix, check this out,

I believe my grades and academic achievements were considered in making admission decision of my application into XYZ college of engineering.

I hope this help?
deltroix - / 2  
Nov 29, 2014   #6
I think an adjective would help here. And, I have used the phrase 'I believe' too many times throughtout my SOP, so if you could provide me another alternative, it would be very nice, thank you! :)
Opuntia - / 13  
Nov 29, 2014   #7
I believe

I trust
I conclude
I think
I reckon
I regard
...
gautam007 3 / 6  
Dec 12, 2014   #8
I think my grades and academics is to be treated as a checkpost for my entry into the xyz college
vangiespen - / 4077  
Dec 13, 2014   #9
You could also try to state this sentence in a manner that shows how the college was impressed by your credentials as a student and hence, offered you enrollment into their university which you gladly accepted. I would phrase it in this manner: One of the university's that offered me a student placement in their engineering department was XYZ University. The invitation to join their student community was based upon my excellent academic record and achievements. I gladly accepted their invitation and graduated from their Engineering Department in XXXX.


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