1.) It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders, they were angelic.
Can this sentence be improved by punctuation?
Not sure, but how does this sound to you?
" It was impossible to overlook these angelic petite wonders." ?
or
" It was impossible to overlook these petite, angelic, wonders." ?
" It was impossible to overlook these angelic petite wonders." ?
or
" It was impossible to overlook these petite, angelic, wonders." ?
Thank you, so much :)
hi, Nicola
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders - they were angelic.
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders: they were angelic
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders, as/because they were angelic
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders - they were angelic.
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders: they were angelic
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders, as/because they were angelic
This is a great thread! My favorite idea is this one:
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders; they were angelic.
Use a semi-colon when two sentences are closely related, like this:
The semi-colon works just like a period; it separates two phrases that could be complete sentences.
It was impossible to overlook these petite wonders; they were angelic.
Use a semi-colon when two sentences are closely related, like this:
The semi-colon works just like a period; it separates two phrases that could be complete sentences.
i think you should use a semicolon instead of a comma.
Another vote for the semicolon. The two parts of the sentence could stand alone as sentences so it calls for more than a comma. A colon doesn't work. A dash is kind of like a casual or beefed-up comma. The way it is written, I'd say that the semicolon is the best bet.
