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"Win in the fierce competition..." - Is this a correct statement grammatically?



wilde 2 / 3  
May 21, 2010   #1
Hi,

I just created one line "Win in the fierce competition with comprehensive solutions"

Please let me know whether this is grammatically right or wrong soon.

Thanks

Smira Roberts 3 / 14  
May 21, 2010   #2
I believe it should be
- "Win the fierce competition with comprehensive solutions"

From:Smira
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
May 22, 2010   #3
ha ha, awesome, Smira, I agree. If you take out the word "in" it makes the sentence slightly less specific, but not in a way that matters. It fixes the problem.

However, if you are worried that it is grammatically incorrect, I think you don't need to worry, because it is not incorrect... just awkward.

:-)
OP wilde 2 / 3  
May 23, 2010   #4
Hey Smira and Kevin
ur suggestion seems really good.

Thanks :)
Smira Roberts 3 / 14  
May 23, 2010   #5
ha ha, Good guess...I guess

thanks Kevin...ur such a moderator!!

From: Smira, xox
Smira Roberts 3 / 14  
May 24, 2010   #6
Oh, no problem, Wilde, anytime :P

From: Smira, xox


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