Graduate / 'the family is the real winner' - Toefl: playing game is fun only when we win [3]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Playing game is one of the many things that all people like to do, because it brings pleasure ,fun and also the happiness. I do not agree with people who think that playing game is fun only when they win, because playing game has other importance than only winning. The first importance of playing game is that it gathers all the member of the family. The parents can spend their free time with their kids on playing game. Whoever wins the game, the family is the real winner, because both the kids and the parents share some thing together. These moments of playing game ...

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Writing Feedback / Toefl:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) [3]

essay Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Each teacher has his own method of teaching. Some teachers like to monopolize the class , so no one has the liberty to talk or to give their point of view. Other teachers prefer to push students to participate in order to make them involved in the course. Personally , I prefer classes where the student do some of the talking.

My preference is based on several reasons . the first one is that the class where student can talk is an attractive class. I can not miss any hour of this class. I make the possible to be present all the time, because the atmosphere of some talking liberty is the best atmosphere a student can have.

Secondly , in classes where the student do some of the talking , is a successful class , because teacher can detect students who do not understand the course among others, so he can clear some ideas. He also has the possibility to get a feedback of their students.

Another reason that make classes where the students do some of the talking better , is that in these classes students and the teacher change their ideas. The benefit of the course will double. Every one can give his idea and receive other . every one can also correct their thought or believe.

Some students like classes where teachers lecture in class . they think that is the best way to be on deadline of the program. I think that it is more important that the students feel comfortable in class than achieving the deadline without any benefit.

to concludewe have to admit that the student who do not have the right to participate in class , will be an inactive person or can not participate in the improvement of their society .

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