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Name: Trajon Waters
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Deadspawn11   
Dec 20, 2016
Undergraduate / What qualities that I possess could possibly add value to your community? To be honest, I don't know [10]

UGA Admission Philosophy Statement Essay

Statement:

<br >Basically, the applicant must have these:
-> Excellence in academic achievement, intellectual pursuits and creative endeavors
-> An understanding of and respect for intellectual, social and cultural differences
-> Significant commitment to citizenship through public service, school activities, community involvement, leadership and/or family
->The ability to benefit from and contribute to a culturally and intellectually diverse community of scholar-citizens

And other qualities they wish to say.

Prompt: Which qualities that you possess will add value to our community?

My UGA Qualities



I'm not very good at writing essays... So help me out, please.

After reviewing my application, I'm sure you're aware that I am not a prestigious academic scholar like the majority of the applicants. I don't have a 3.8 - 4.0 GPA. I don't have any honorary awards. I'm not the leader of various clubs. I don't play a sport. I'm not active in my community. Basically, my stats aren't as competitive as the other applicants. So what qualities that I possess could possibly add value to your community? To be honest, I don't know.

Throughout my high school years, I haven't been putting in maximum effort when it came to my grades and my life outside of school. I didn't get many chances to participate in extracurriculars. When I had a chance, I didn't take it because I was afraid. I wasn't active in my community because I was afraid of it. As I look back, I ask myself, 'What was I so afraid of?" Honestly, I think I was afraid of the challenge. I was afraid of failing. However, by not doing these things, I've already failed myself. I'm stuck with mediocre applications, with my essays being my only hope. Now, I have to face the challenge of getting into college.

I do possess individual qualities that could be beneficial to UGA such as my creativity through my creative writing, my honesty, and my determination, but I do not believe it is enough. If I am accepted, I wish to use my time at UGA to try to gain more qualities. Using this, I will be able to add real value to your community. Even if I'm not accepted, I'll be able to add add to wherever the road takes me.
Deadspawn11   
Dec 21, 2016
Undergraduate / What qualities that I possess could possibly add value to your community? To be honest, I don't know [10]

@Holt

Alright, so I'm using my last paragraph as my opening now. Of course I can't just say, "I do have individual qualities that could be beneficial to UGA." So what's a good way to start this off?

Also, I'm African American. UGA is a predominately white university. Would stating that I could bring more diversity to the community be good thing to say?
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