yass029
Jan 24, 2017
Scholarship / My future perspective and why I deserve the scholarship [7]
Need an honest feedback on my essay draft below, any help would be much appreciated, Thanks in advance!!
INSTRUCTION
We would like to know your motivation for the VU Fellowship Programme. Why do you think you deserve to receive a VUFP scholarship? (...)
During my work experience, I have noticed how the dynamic of human behaviour could shape organization environment and culture. I am lucky to have experienced work environment that supported growth and success, also to encounter situation where there is no mutual respect, trust, and open communication between colleagues. When I look at Google as the best work place in the world according to Great Place to WorkŽ Institute, the organization is not only famous on giving attractive facilities but also encourages employee's autonomy and develops innovation capabilities that constantly nurtured and managed. In my opinion, this kind of approach could sustain trust levels and drive employees to perform better. Therefore, this situation motivated me to pursue master degree in work and organizational psychology and help me achieving my aim to promote a quality of work and life balance.
In the future, I envision a positive working environment where communication is transparent and open, creativity and productivity flourish, and each individual perceive their work as a personal journey, so they are empowered to achieve their highest potential. Although creating this state of condition will not be easy, I am assured that my learning on work and organizational psychology will prepared me adequately. As my beloved late mother always told me "explore the world, meet new people and gain wisdom", I am determined to continue pursuing master degree abroad where I can meet new people from different region, experience foreign culture and at the same time escalate my passion in psychology.
While I am constantly saving since a few years ago, I still cannot afford to pay all the cost for studying abroad. Currently, I still looking for full time job and living with my father - 61 years old man and already retired from his full time job. For this reason, I want to be self sufficient in funding my education. I feel grateful to find scholarship opportunities like this Program that could give me a chance to achieve financial stability and accomplish my educational goals. Correspondingly, my insight based on background and working experience could be an added value in the University. I will bring my talent, my enthusiasm, my positive outlook and give my effort to be successful, and thus increasing the value of this scholarship.
Need an honest feedback on my essay draft below, any help would be much appreciated, Thanks in advance!!
INSTRUCTION
We would like to know your motivation for the VU Fellowship Programme. Why do you think you deserve to receive a VUFP scholarship? (...)
explore the world, meet new people and gain wisdom
During my work experience, I have noticed how the dynamic of human behaviour could shape organization environment and culture. I am lucky to have experienced work environment that supported growth and success, also to encounter situation where there is no mutual respect, trust, and open communication between colleagues. When I look at Google as the best work place in the world according to Great Place to WorkŽ Institute, the organization is not only famous on giving attractive facilities but also encourages employee's autonomy and develops innovation capabilities that constantly nurtured and managed. In my opinion, this kind of approach could sustain trust levels and drive employees to perform better. Therefore, this situation motivated me to pursue master degree in work and organizational psychology and help me achieving my aim to promote a quality of work and life balance.
In the future, I envision a positive working environment where communication is transparent and open, creativity and productivity flourish, and each individual perceive their work as a personal journey, so they are empowered to achieve their highest potential. Although creating this state of condition will not be easy, I am assured that my learning on work and organizational psychology will prepared me adequately. As my beloved late mother always told me "explore the world, meet new people and gain wisdom", I am determined to continue pursuing master degree abroad where I can meet new people from different region, experience foreign culture and at the same time escalate my passion in psychology.
While I am constantly saving since a few years ago, I still cannot afford to pay all the cost for studying abroad. Currently, I still looking for full time job and living with my father - 61 years old man and already retired from his full time job. For this reason, I want to be self sufficient in funding my education. I feel grateful to find scholarship opportunities like this Program that could give me a chance to achieve financial stability and accomplish my educational goals. Correspondingly, my insight based on background and working experience could be an added value in the University. I will bring my talent, my enthusiasm, my positive outlook and give my effort to be successful, and thus increasing the value of this scholarship.