Raiasu
Feb 2, 2017
Scholarship / Programmed to achieve goals. Self introduction-letter for Scholarship [10]
Hello to everyone! I'm applying for scholarship and since my mother tongue isn't English I need a help
Please could you help me to see mistakes of grammar and content. The letter is bad but I really don't know how to make it better :(
Thank you in advance!
o Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc
o Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
o Your motivations for applying for this program
o Reason for study in Korea
Dear Korean Government Scholarship Program Admissions,
I would greatly appreciate NIIED for the opportunity to make submission
Often people see marketing as a merely tedious science of products and ways they are selling to customers. However, each of us is aware of a story when we'd fell in love at first sight with a black blouse or how we couldn't pass a favorite cosmetic shop smelling flowers of azaleas and a moment staying in front of advertising signboards with golden framing and beautiful models no able to take eyes off. People don't see behind the curtain there is an unremitting toil of marketing functionary.
I remember when my father opened his small store, I was in seventh heaven as it was an opportunity to put all my energy and creativity in that unusual direction. As it turned out, teen girl"s knowledge was insufficient but I experienced being a cashier, accountant and designer conventional grocery store. It was a wonderful experience, but I wanted more.
In school, I was an active child who was involved in all sorts of activities. Who says that a person can be good only in one thing? Among the most significant school achievements I notice that I have represented the school at a meeting of the children Duma and was a Chairman of Youth Education department. I was a participant in the ecology and wrote scientific work, which was awarded a diploma of Minister of Ecology. And being in love in art, I drew a lot and finally got the chance to work in a glossy magazine XXX for young people.
In 2013 I became a student of the XXX on specialty linguistics. My choice was based on idea that languages take an advantages and as the study will not be too difficult occupation for me. I already went through this as being tatar daughter I did not know the Russian language when I went to the first class. Learning a language was my little skill.
I saw myself only in marketing. That's what I liked; this is what has always inspired. This is an opportunity to engage in my favorite thing and bring from it the benefit of others, despite my past education, I have many advantages, I can read the specialized literature in English, I have skills of learning huge lists of words and studying grammar, so the Korean is not going to be a problem for me, I worked in marketing and I have good leadership and communication skills. This is my never-ending interest in the news from the world of SEO, a content marketing and various intelligence and the results of market research conducted in different countries. I want to invest all my efforts to my future profession, which is created at the intersection of art and science with huge potential for the development of the country's market.
University years I was mainly occupied by study. Nevertheless, every summer holidays I was involved in something that changed me for the better.
Dream big and fight for your dreams. I programmed myself to achieve goals despite the difficulties and obstacles. Following this principle I know that it's also important to know certainly your goal and work hard.
After the first course I admitted leadership school and worked in a camp for talented youth XXX and XXX, where I learned how to find common language with people. In the same year I became the organizer of the International Forum of Tatar youth, along with the liability attaches. Next year Kazan accepted a FINA competition where I had the privilege of working with athletes as a manager of Lounge zone, where I supervised the work of volunteers and service.
What pushed me to participate in this program? Participation in KGSP program and the opportunity to become a student of marketing at the University of Korea is a dream which I can't refuse. I'm not able to renounce my past and mistakes, but at the moment, all I have to do is look ahead and choose the best path for my life. This program is known all over the world and has gained much popularity as it gives a chance to study in the most perfect place on earth and provides everything you need for better education. This is a great opportunity to learn a new language, to move toward to my dream-profession and this is the universities with the highest quality of education and professors. If I have the honor to be selected to study in Korea, I promise not to disappoint my teachers and do everything possible to benefit from Korea and draw its attention to other countries as its experience is unique and needs to be examined and known by every professional in the world.
Hello to everyone! I'm applying for scholarship and since my mother tongue isn't English I need a help
Please could you help me to see mistakes of grammar and content. The letter is bad but I really don't know how to make it better :(
Thank you in advance!
o Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc
o Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
o Your motivations for applying for this program
o Reason for study in Korea
Dream big and fight for your dreams
Dear Korean Government Scholarship Program Admissions,
I would greatly appreciate NIIED for the opportunity to make submission
Often people see marketing as a merely tedious science of products and ways they are selling to customers. However, each of us is aware of a story when we'd fell in love at first sight with a black blouse or how we couldn't pass a favorite cosmetic shop smelling flowers of azaleas and a moment staying in front of advertising signboards with golden framing and beautiful models no able to take eyes off. People don't see behind the curtain there is an unremitting toil of marketing functionary.
I remember when my father opened his small store, I was in seventh heaven as it was an opportunity to put all my energy and creativity in that unusual direction. As it turned out, teen girl"s knowledge was insufficient but I experienced being a cashier, accountant and designer conventional grocery store. It was a wonderful experience, but I wanted more.
In school, I was an active child who was involved in all sorts of activities. Who says that a person can be good only in one thing? Among the most significant school achievements I notice that I have represented the school at a meeting of the children Duma and was a Chairman of Youth Education department. I was a participant in the ecology and wrote scientific work, which was awarded a diploma of Minister of Ecology. And being in love in art, I drew a lot and finally got the chance to work in a glossy magazine XXX for young people.
In 2013 I became a student of the XXX on specialty linguistics. My choice was based on idea that languages take an advantages and as the study will not be too difficult occupation for me. I already went through this as being tatar daughter I did not know the Russian language when I went to the first class. Learning a language was my little skill.
I saw myself only in marketing. That's what I liked; this is what has always inspired. This is an opportunity to engage in my favorite thing and bring from it the benefit of others, despite my past education, I have many advantages, I can read the specialized literature in English, I have skills of learning huge lists of words and studying grammar, so the Korean is not going to be a problem for me, I worked in marketing and I have good leadership and communication skills. This is my never-ending interest in the news from the world of SEO, a content marketing and various intelligence and the results of market research conducted in different countries. I want to invest all my efforts to my future profession, which is created at the intersection of art and science with huge potential for the development of the country's market.
University years I was mainly occupied by study. Nevertheless, every summer holidays I was involved in something that changed me for the better.
Dream big and fight for your dreams. I programmed myself to achieve goals despite the difficulties and obstacles. Following this principle I know that it's also important to know certainly your goal and work hard.
After the first course I admitted leadership school and worked in a camp for talented youth XXX and XXX, where I learned how to find common language with people. In the same year I became the organizer of the International Forum of Tatar youth, along with the liability attaches. Next year Kazan accepted a FINA competition where I had the privilege of working with athletes as a manager of Lounge zone, where I supervised the work of volunteers and service.
What pushed me to participate in this program? Participation in KGSP program and the opportunity to become a student of marketing at the University of Korea is a dream which I can't refuse. I'm not able to renounce my past and mistakes, but at the moment, all I have to do is look ahead and choose the best path for my life. This program is known all over the world and has gained much popularity as it gives a chance to study in the most perfect place on earth and provides everything you need for better education. This is a great opportunity to learn a new language, to move toward to my dream-profession and this is the universities with the highest quality of education and professors. If I have the honor to be selected to study in Korea, I promise not to disappoint my teachers and do everything possible to benefit from Korea and draw its attention to other countries as its experience is unique and needs to be examined and known by every professional in the world.