Undergraduate / My life, my environment - UCF Admissions Essay [11]

Great essay, in last sentenc einstead of " I could not have" change it to "I never had".

Undergraduate / My life, my environment - UCF Admissions Essay [11]

what about this?
I hope that day I will be able to provide my children with a lifestyle I never lived,and hopefully they will learn to appriciate what they have,like I did and still do.

Undergraduate / My life, my environment - UCF Admissions Essay [11]

is number one on the essay topics part of yourt essay, becouse i looked at the main page and theres only 3??????