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Name: Benjamin Gaboeletswe
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BENJI31   
Aug 12, 2017
Scholarship / "the act of leading a group of people" - Leadership. Essay for Chevening application [2]

My journey as a leader



The oxford English dictionary defines leadership as "the act of leading a group of people". Therefore, to better answer this question, I have to and assimilate my life to this definition.

Coming from a small backwater village, I grew up with a strong sense of community. I have always had a confounding obligation to serve my community, intellectually and professionally. It is this sense of duty and responsibility that has instilled in me the need to always play a leading role and be an agent for change.

I have an innate ability of getting people with different aspirations and views to come together and work for a common good. This ability came to the fore in 2014 when my wife and I were concerned by the Primary School Leaving results of the local school. Buoyed by a sense of responsibility and duty for the children, we launched an online campaign. It targeted the parents, business people, and other stakeholders to try turn and turn the situation around.

We started off by raising funds to purchase revision text books for all subject taken at the standard seven final examinations. We then mobilized resources to enable tutorial classes for students during school holidays.

The campaign was a resounding success; we managed to acquire revision books for each of the seven subjects taken during the final examination. We also succeeded in hosting a week long tutorial session conducted by teachers from the community who had come home for the holidays.

This groundbreaking initiative lead to the formation of an online organization called Mmatshumo Development Pressure Group (MDPG). The Organization, which I am both founder and chairman, is now on its 2nd year. Through it, I have managed to organize activities such as buying school shoes for under privileged children in the community.

My country just like other developing countries is saddled with a high rate of unemployment. It is common sight to see graduates, others older than me hassling for small time jobs. The situation is even dire in a small community like mine because it perpetuates the circle of poverty. In recognizing this need I organized a workshop whose aim was to assist out of school and unemployed young people in the community.

The workshop included motivational talks from some successful people in the village. This are people that the participants new and could relate with. I invited professionals from different Government departments and Private Institutions who shared their services and how to access them.

My journey as a leader is only just beginning. Chevening will not only enhance my academic credentials but it will also accord me the opportunity to refine my ideas and come up with new ones that will be helpful in taking my community forward.

It is only through such a community centered approach that development milestones can be achieved. My hope is that the little success that we are beginning to have as a community will inspire others to replicate so that it becomes a national roadmap.
BENJI31   
Aug 12, 2017
Scholarship / 'Teaching English Language' - MY CHEVENING LEADERSHIP/INFLUENCER ESSAY------- Bankole Akinfolarin [5]

@Bankhole i like how you start each paragraph, it is engaging and makes one want to read further, however just like @Holt alluded, do not dwell much into describing what a leader ought to be like, speak more on what you did or do to demonstrate those leadership qualities. The 500 word limit is short so concentrate on those things that people do not already know about.
BENJI31   
Aug 19, 2017
Scholarship / 'Teaching English Language' - MY CHEVENING LEADERSHIP/INFLUENCER ESSAY------- Bankole Akinfolarin [5]

Sorry i took long to revert, you have such a brilliant example of leadership and i think you are not doing justice to it here. allow the story to come through first and then worry about grammar later, i think because you are an English teacher you paid too much attention to the English correctness than telling your story. having said that though this has potential to be a brilliant essay, please see my few corrections below.

while thirty percent was receptive but no help- the rest were receptive but not helpful. My passion for education never ... My passion of being an educator motivated me to solder on and assist this community despite the lack of interest from stakeholders.

Some of them would opt out of school for the market ... rather go to the market day than attend school. I then knew then that their sense (...) and I had to come insomeone had to intervene.

Personally I met with the King ... I took it upon myself to meet the King of the region to....
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