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naz1204   
Sep 25, 2017
Writing Feedback / Essay about unsatisfactory habits (TOEFL) [3]

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Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Ever since of discovering own property people are tend to be more individual. At the beginning they had a land, then they built a house there, after they started to fill the house with different things. In my opinion, the process of evolution is one of the reasons why people are unsatisfied with current things.

Most of the inventions are not appeared from nowhere. By looking to the nature, people learned to facilitate their life. For instance, it was difficult to cross long distances by walk, so they wanted to fly as birds. In consequence, people have created planes and helicopters.
naz1204   
Sep 25, 2017
Writing Feedback / Essay about unsatisfactory habits (TOEFL) [3]

@Holt
Thank you for your reply! I appreciate your advices. This is my first time writing an essay. I will do my best next time :)
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