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Name: Kevin Yang
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Aug 29, 2017
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1- the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity [4]

physical activity in australia



The chart shows the percentage of Australian doing regular exercise in different ages.

Through the chart, we can clearly see that women have higher percentage after the age of 24, and men have the highest percentage in 15 to 24. The curves formed by the different age groups in both genders are completely different, which means that change of the percentage is converse.

Looking in to details, women's percentage of regular exercise increases from 47.7% to 53.3% at the age group of 45 to 54, and the figure declines sharply after the age group of 55 to 64. On the other hand, the drastic drop of men's regular exercise percentage starts from 15 to 24 years old, and it climbs up after the age of 35 to 44. Also, the gap between the percentage of both men and women reaches the maximum of 13% at the group of 35 to 44, and the two numbers become almost the same at the group of 65 and older.



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