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Sep 3, 2017
Scholarship / Chevening Essay for university choices-clear enough [6]
I wil really appreciate some help on this essay for chevening schoolarship. If you find a grammar error please let me know, im workin on my writing in english skills.
i would like to know if i sound clear enough.
this is the question
Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future
¿For how long will this be sustainable? Was the question I asked myself during a field trip to a site construction, when I saw the huge amount of construction precast steel being used in this apartment building my company was designing.
Urban development at my country has increase during the last years, I have been a part of that, we are a growing population that demands urban development and in order to achieve this, environmental issues and environmental aspects of such a development are often taken for granted or just seen as simple requirements, this approach leads to the environmental deterioration that we are experimenting: deforestation and water related issues, this panorama personally concerns me to a professional and a personal scale.
I strongly believe that as a civil engineer I can play a key role in changing this scenario by becoming an environmental consultant which is the career path I want to pursue after my master degree studies in U.K, so I have selected the following courses
This course complements my work experience as a designer, since I've been working in structural design more recently foundations, I'm aware that the better we know the behaviour of natural factors as soil and water, the better we can design understand and furthermore previse environmental effects so this course offers me the understanding of this phenomena by providing courses like Engineering Geology and Hydro environmental modelling; also the construction management with the sustainable approach is a plus.
Far beyond of complement what really makes this course be my first choice is the broad multidisciplinary courses option all of them applicable to resolve environmental issues which works perfectly for me wanting to become an environmental consultant.
Being a consultant often represent dealing with different clients at the same time, incorporate socio economic factors to visualize in an efficient way that brings the less damage, I choose this course because it encompass both skills, at my last work place I some exigent clients where I had to make use of management skills, so this approach will feed those skill complementing with my main goal that is: get a deeper understanding of environmental issues and how to solve them.
I wil really appreciate some help on this essay for chevening schoolarship. If you find a grammar error please let me know, im workin on my writing in english skills.
i would like to know if i sound clear enough.
this is the question
Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future
¿For how long will this be sustainable? Was the question I asked myself during a field trip to a site construction, when I saw the huge amount of construction precast steel being used in this apartment building my company was designing.
Urban development at my country has increase during the last years, I have been a part of that, we are a growing population that demands urban development and in order to achieve this, environmental issues and environmental aspects of such a development are often taken for granted or just seen as simple requirements, this approach leads to the environmental deterioration that we are experimenting: deforestation and water related issues, this panorama personally concerns me to a professional and a personal scale.
I strongly believe that as a civil engineer I can play a key role in changing this scenario by becoming an environmental consultant which is the career path I want to pursue after my master degree studies in U.K, so I have selected the following courses
1.Cardiff University-MSc Civil and Geo-environmental Engineering:
This course complements my work experience as a designer, since I've been working in structural design more recently foundations, I'm aware that the better we know the behaviour of natural factors as soil and water, the better we can design understand and furthermore previse environmental effects so this course offers me the understanding of this phenomena by providing courses like Engineering Geology and Hydro environmental modelling; also the construction management with the sustainable approach is a plus.
Far beyond of complement what really makes this course be my first choice is the broad multidisciplinary courses option all of them applicable to resolve environmental issues which works perfectly for me wanting to become an environmental consultant.
2.Leeds University-MSc Environmental Engineering and Project Management
Being a consultant often represent dealing with different clients at the same time, incorporate socio economic factors to visualize in an efficient way that brings the less damage, I choose this course because it encompass both skills, at my last work place I some exigent clients where I had to make use of management skills, so this approach will feed those skill complementing with my main goal that is: get a deeper understanding of environmental issues and how to solve them.