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Oct 25, 2017
Scholarship / Chevening Post Study Plan: Helping Indonesia Using Data [5]
Hi All!
I made a draft for my Chevening Post Study Plan Essay, I would really appreciate if you could proofread my essay, whether for the grammar or the overall content. Thank you so much in advance! :)
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I have always wanted to be helpful to a lot of people, but I didn't know how. I even had a question in my mind "do I have to be a doctor to be able to help a lot of people?". Then I grew up and realize, the most important thing is doing something that "gives impact", whether it's a direct or indirect impact.
When I was in my last year in college, I learn about big data analytics. As a student, I know from the book I read about how big data analytics can improve life quality by giving the right information at the right time, so every decision made will be data-driven. Although I didn't really feel it until I got my first job as a Big Data Analytic & Monetizing Officer in an Advertising & Agency Company.
My team got some project from other companies and the government, we were expected to provide some information using their internal data and combined with the data available on the internet. This information will be used to support them in decision making, acquire new customers, or in some government's cases, to help them formulate strategy and create policy. The moment our team completed and succeeded the project, I realize that we had been making something great. Something that will help thousands of people to have a better life. At that time, I decided that I will be focusing my career in big data analytics area.
I am planning to return to Indonesia and work as a big data analyst in a company, to continue my contribution to help people in my country having a better quality of life. I will also do some research that will be useful for the development of my home country. In the future, I want to devote my self to education and become a lecturer to share my knowledge, experiences and influence the young generation to create something that will give a good impact on others.
I believe that taking my master degree in UK will give me an exceptional opportunity to meet many people around the world to exchange great ideas, make collaboration, and broaden my network. I will also gain useful skills and knowledge from the expert to enrich my experience for my future plan.
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Hi All!
I made a draft for my Chevening Post Study Plan Essay, I would really appreciate if you could proofread my essay, whether for the grammar or the overall content. Thank you so much in advance! :)
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Big Data Analytic & Monetizing Officer profession
I have always wanted to be helpful to a lot of people, but I didn't know how. I even had a question in my mind "do I have to be a doctor to be able to help a lot of people?". Then I grew up and realize, the most important thing is doing something that "gives impact", whether it's a direct or indirect impact.
When I was in my last year in college, I learn about big data analytics. As a student, I know from the book I read about how big data analytics can improve life quality by giving the right information at the right time, so every decision made will be data-driven. Although I didn't really feel it until I got my first job as a Big Data Analytic & Monetizing Officer in an Advertising & Agency Company.
My team got some project from other companies and the government, we were expected to provide some information using their internal data and combined with the data available on the internet. This information will be used to support them in decision making, acquire new customers, or in some government's cases, to help them formulate strategy and create policy. The moment our team completed and succeeded the project, I realize that we had been making something great. Something that will help thousands of people to have a better life. At that time, I decided that I will be focusing my career in big data analytics area.
I am planning to return to Indonesia and work as a big data analyst in a company, to continue my contribution to help people in my country having a better quality of life. I will also do some research that will be useful for the development of my home country. In the future, I want to devote my self to education and become a lecturer to share my knowledge, experiences and influence the young generation to create something that will give a good impact on others.
I believe that taking my master degree in UK will give me an exceptional opportunity to meet many people around the world to exchange great ideas, make collaboration, and broaden my network. I will also gain useful skills and knowledge from the expert to enrich my experience for my future plan.
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