Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1: compared the graph and table about water consumption [2]

Question
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwild and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

water usage of the different sectors in the world

The graph compares water use of the different sectors in the world including agriculture, industrial use and domestic use, from the year 1900 to 2000. The table illustrates Brazil and Congo consume the amount of water in 2000.

Overall, the amount of water consumption was an upward trend in all three sectors between 1900 and 2000. Brazil experienced higher water consumption for each person than Congo.

The water consumption for agriculture was around 500km3 in the year 1900, and steadily increased to approximately 3000 km3 in 2000 which is the most amount than other sectors. In 1900, industrial and domestic use consumed around 100km3. And then, the amount of these two sectors gradually rose around 800km3 and 400 km3, respectively.

The table shows that Brazil had 176 million people with 26500km2 irrigated area and the water consumption for each person was 259m3 in 2000. In the meantime, there were 5.2 million population with 100m3 agriculture area and 8m3 water consumption per person is calculated in Congo.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1: the graph compared the consumption of fish and meat in a country [NEW]

Question
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

My answer
The graph compared that the different kinds of fish and meat were consumed in a European country from 1974 to 2004. The total amount of consumption was 570 grams per person per week in 1979. After 25 years, the total amount decreased to approximately 480 grams.

In 1979, beef and lamb were the first and second high level for the consumption of meet, accounting for 230 and 150 grams, respectively. However, the data is shown a downward trend in the period. In 2004, both them decreased around 80 grams and became the second and third kind of meet in total amount.

In this country, each person consumed 140 grams chicken per week in 1979, but the amount gradually increased to 240 grams in 2004 and chicken became the highest level in the total amount. In contrast, fish contributed the lowest amount in the total consumption in 1979 and it still slightly decreased to 40 grams in 2004.

Overall, during this 25 years, the main consumption of meat and fish became chicken which was higher 100 grams than the second level of meat. In addition, fish made the lowest contribution in the whole period.

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