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Nov 16, 2017
Writing Feedback / Different opinions regarding weather children should be taught to be competitive or cooperative [5]
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions regarding weather children should be taught to be competitive or cooperative. Although competitiveness can sometimes be profitable in life, but from my perspective trying to cooperate is more prominent.
On one hand, children challenging each other have some valuable benefits. First of all, whilst they strongly contest to achieve a precious end, not only they are unconsciously boosting their growth and aptitude, but also surely find out where their owns failings are. Consequently, this healthful rivalry may generate a persistent and also courageous child who confidently can dare outdoor difficulties. Moreover, being competitive not to mention in children's lessons make outstanding contributions to their encouragement in direction of diligence and so initiative.
On the other hand, sense of humanity and friendship never rises until children gather up and make common cause with each other over the life obstacles. To cite an example, children's friendly interactions on a after-school birthday party would be purposive. Their teamwork in order to buy birthday items, perfectly installing them, laying tables, preparing cake and all other stuffs require for a part together could teach them an important lesson of life. More precisely, if they become united they could win trough all the troubles and attain whatever their desire. Along side this, there are substantial advantages to it, some of which could be advance pace of progress, spread love and kindness, decrease of depression and etc. that worth to be considered.
On the whole, both competitive and cooperative characteristics of children are beneficent, but I believe children work together could derive crucial profits which would be useful in their future life.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
competition and cooperation among children
People have different opinions regarding weather children should be taught to be competitive or cooperative. Although competitiveness can sometimes be profitable in life, but from my perspective trying to cooperate is more prominent.
On one hand, children challenging each other have some valuable benefits. First of all, whilst they strongly contest to achieve a precious end, not only they are unconsciously boosting their growth and aptitude, but also surely find out where their owns failings are. Consequently, this healthful rivalry may generate a persistent and also courageous child who confidently can dare outdoor difficulties. Moreover, being competitive not to mention in children's lessons make outstanding contributions to their encouragement in direction of diligence and so initiative.
On the other hand, sense of humanity and friendship never rises until children gather up and make common cause with each other over the life obstacles. To cite an example, children's friendly interactions on a after-school birthday party would be purposive. Their teamwork in order to buy birthday items, perfectly installing them, laying tables, preparing cake and all other stuffs require for a part together could teach them an important lesson of life. More precisely, if they become united they could win trough all the troubles and attain whatever their desire. Along side this, there are substantial advantages to it, some of which could be advance pace of progress, spread love and kindness, decrease of depression and etc. that worth to be considered.
On the whole, both competitive and cooperative characteristics of children are beneficent, but I believe children work together could derive crucial profits which would be useful in their future life.
(307 words)
Hi guys.
I hope you're doing ok. Really need your precious opinions regarding my essay. I'll be deeply grateful if you correct and give me an estimated band.
Thanks a lot in advance.