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Name: Khang Tran
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Nov 28, 2017
Undergraduate / USC Undergad Supplemental Essay - Why USC? Major: Communications 2nd choice: International Studies [4]

Hey everyone, I hope someone could help give me some feedback of this short essay. Let me know if you have any suggestions!

USC Annenberg essay

Prompt: Describe how you plan to pursue your academic interests at USC. Please feel free to address your first- and second-choice major selections. (250 word limit)

Innovations in communications are continuously redefining society's interactions. After enrolling in IB Language and Literature course junior year, I developed an interest for the field of communications. As my perception of the world slowly changes, I shifted from taking social media for granted to cogitating the agenda behind every ad billboard, campaign, and poster.

At USC Annenberg, I believe my fascination for communications could flourish to its full potential. I plan to major in Communications, B.A., in which the degree would prepare me for the competitive field of digital media and marketing. Moreover, USC is also a central hub for job opportunities. As much as I am attracted to vibrant LA culture, I am equally drawn to USC for its extensive internship connections with media companies: Mashable, Collab, and BuzzFeed to name a few. I am also interested in professional researches within USC like the Center for Digital Future, a perfect platform for me to collaborate with others on the study of communication technology and mass media impact on society.

Annenberg could also offer me with study-abroad opportunities to places like Sydney or Shanghai. By examining communications from a different culture and perspective, I could gain new insights on the field. Hence, I also plan to pursue International Studies major and expand my scope of application to a global scale. Finally, with my previous experience as a yearbook editor, I hope to broadcast my passion for journalism and become a part of the phenomenal Annenberg TV News team.
ryanjtran   
Nov 29, 2017
Undergraduate / USC Undergad Supplemental Essay - Why USC? Major: Communications 2nd choice: International Studies [4]

@Holt
Thank you so much for the feedback! You saved me big time right there. I took some time to digest and look at the prompt again and I did adjust my writing according to your feedback. Below is a revised, hopefully, more specific draft. Let me know if it's better.

At USC Annenberg, I believe my interest in the field of communications could grow to its full potential. I plan to major in Communications, B.A., in which the degree would prepare me for the competitive field of digital media and marketing. Moreover, USC is also a central hub for job opportunities. Along with the vibrant LA culture, USC offers profound internship opportunities with notable media companies-Mashable, Collab, and BuzzFeed to name a few-all in which I will take advantage to apply my knowledge in the classroom to the real world.

I am also interested in professional research within USC such as the Center for Digital Future. Specifically, their ongoing World Internet Project provokes a strong interest for me for I passionately believe that access to the Internet is a civil rights issue. Hence, I plan to collaborate in this extensive research and data collection led by renowned USC faculties and hope to be a contributor to future WIP reports.

During the spring semester, I look forward to studying abroad through one of Annenberg International Programs in Australia. By exploring mass media and communication in Sydney, an environment different from the US, I could gain knowledge to the impacts of communications with a distinct worldview. Lastly, as a Communications student, I will also join USC Annenberg Media's Mobile and Emerging Platforms Team. As a part of the team, I am excited to work with fellow staffs on story adaptations for online readers through new, engaging formats.
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