Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 : Material Possessions or Kindness/Trust? [5]

Hi zeqy, I have read your essay very deep. but there are some errors of which you are to correct it. like, grammar and spelling mistakes.

also I would like to tell you to correct your conculusion. otherwise good trial.

Student Talk / Hi everyone! Welcome at EssayForum thread. [414]

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Request to all EF members to help me

Hello everybody, my name is Abdikafi and I am from somalia. My dears I joined EF today (29-11-2017)just few minutes ago. my aim is to help my self in a way forward to learn english very well and to be helped in my scholarship essay.

Also I heve successfuly completed my
highschool this year "2017". I'd like to study university abroad and am suppose to write an essay in my scholarahip application of studying computer engineering. soon I am going to Post my essay about my self .

Hope you are ready to help me . I appreciate all the members for their good ideas that they exchange always.
Thank you very much!