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Name: Rachel Boon
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radszx   
Dec 31, 2017
Undergraduate / Why I want to study In ** College? (Scholarship) - there are four reasons [3]

I have a scholarship presentation in around 2 days. Please give comments/ critiques or change whichever part of the script that seems lacking. Thank you.

college choice motivation



Allow me to begin this presentation, Firstly, why I chose to be in ** College. It would be a lie to say that I was not attracted to ** good reputation- being the best private university in Malaysia and being the top 1% university in Asia. But mainly there are four reasons that I find truly attractive of **. First, its intake. Second, the program the college offer, South Australia Certificate of Education, third, the education system itself and finally, its accommodation.

You see, as soon as I completed my SPM, the first thing that popped in my mind is one, I could not wait to study more and focus on medicine, the course I want to take. And second, I cannot imagine myself waiting for my SPM results for four months, then need to wait another to be accepted in a university and further my studies in pre-u. The fact that ** offer January intake already lift a whole lot of burden off my shoulder. One thing for sure, is the significant reduction of time to complete my basic studies and provides a faster, more efficient way to gear up for tertiary education.

Honestly, I knew nothing about Australian Matriculation or SACE, yes I had heard of it, but it was not even at the back of my mind until I recently attended an education fair held in ***, where one of the panels recommended taking SACE in ** as long as I was not the kind of student who studies last minute and always burn the midnight oil. But I have to admit, I am one of those students. In fact when I heard of the exam system which is based on 30% finals and 70% coursework, I was worried if I can tackle the continuous presentations and projects assigned to me. But on the other hand, I believe that once I take SACE, I have no other choice but to be consistent in my studies to achieve excellent grades. It might be a huge change for me, I believe it to be a good one as consistency is the key to success. And it is time for me to bade goodbyes to all those last-minute cramp studies.

As we all know, education system is the integral part in schools and of course universities. In **, the system is unparalleled as compared to any other universities be it government or private. The best example would have to be the 24-week prehouseman ship training in the final semester. Not only can I have first-hand experience as to these clinical practices, it provides an earlier exposure to what to expect for my two-year houseman ship after graduation. Not only is it limited to that, ** offers an extensive clinical exposure for the ultimate medical education for students. Here, students even as early as Year 1 will be able to apply basic medical sciences to clinical practice. I find it extremely _________ to be exposed to people of different demographics, cultures and environments, physical examination techniques using both stimulated patients and models. As ** focus on a holistic education, it is ______ as it provides me with better understanding of the community's health and medical needs- the very important thing required as a doctor-to-be. Of course, these hands-on practice would not be complete without regular field trips and public health activities organised by ** itself. These trips would be a life-enriching experience for me. As quoted by Joel Neoh, a class of SACE 2011, ** help me understand and embrace curiosity at an early age. I was encouraged to question, explore and discover, it built my confidence in living projects. I always wanted to learn more, do more, see more and ultimately achieve more. Just as how he achieved success in entrepreneurship, I too believe that in **, I'll be tailored to _______

Finally, I still have to say that ** is well known for its best accommodation, so then again of course the fact that ** is located at the *, and the fact that ** offer on-campus once again affirmed my choice of enrolling in **. It is truly incredible when a student need not to even step out of the campus to shop for food and necessity as everything is just within the reach. I find it very convenient and I wouldn't lie, having two over-protective parents, ** is the best environment for me.
radszx   
Jan 1, 2018
Undergraduate / Why I want to study In ** College? (Scholarship) - there are four reasons [3]

Uh oh, it seems like i need to redo the essay. Does it sound too much like a research paper? But i honestly wrote the essay based on what i feel. :/ Can you give some examples on how 'my learning needs will be served by uni? i thought that i just answered that on my script? My academic intentions/ interest? umm.... can you put it in a simpler language pls? :/ And since my presentation is a day away, is there any way i can improve on it in a short period of time?
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