Mercyme90213
Sep 13, 2009
Undergraduate / 'Salvadoran culture and multiculture' - UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN---diversity [4]
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"We know that diversity makes us a better university -- better for learning, for teaching, and for conducting research."
(U-M President Mary Sue Coleman)
Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment on how your personal experiences and achievements would contribute to the diversity of the University of Michigan. (250 words)
While doing a summer reading assignment for my English class I stumbled upon the book "A Thousand Splendid Suns" written by Khalid Hosseini. It tells the story of two Afghanistan women who deal with the struggles of everyday life. While I previously knew women in Afghanistan were oppressed, I went into reading that book fairly ignorant of the vast cultural differences between America and Afghanistan. For example, I was shocked to learn that women had to ask their husbands' permission before doing anything, and that it was not uncommon for men to have multiple wives. After finishing the book, I realize I had been blind. Never have I had a more eye-opening experience or gained more respect for the women who had the strength and courage to attempt to emerge from this type of oppression. My newfound respect towards people in Afghanistan, specifically women, comes from realizing how many struggles they must overcome that I have not had to worry about. Being a woman of different ethnicities, the message of this book really hit home. By reading this I now have a greater understanding of diverse cultures and a better appreciation for my own unique, multicultural background. My father and mother both instilled in me a sense of pride for who I am. I believe that because I am multiracial and have experienced firsthand my father's Salvadoran culture I can bring cultural understanding and diversity to the University of Michigan.
Could someone give me some ideas on how to make this better and help me proofread? thanks!
"We know that diversity makes us a better university -- better for learning, for teaching, and for conducting research."
(U-M President Mary Sue Coleman)
Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment on how your personal experiences and achievements would contribute to the diversity of the University of Michigan. (250 words)
While doing a summer reading assignment for my English class I stumbled upon the book "A Thousand Splendid Suns" written by Khalid Hosseini. It tells the story of two Afghanistan women who deal with the struggles of everyday life. While I previously knew women in Afghanistan were oppressed, I went into reading that book fairly ignorant of the vast cultural differences between America and Afghanistan. For example, I was shocked to learn that women had to ask their husbands' permission before doing anything, and that it was not uncommon for men to have multiple wives. After finishing the book, I realize I had been blind. Never have I had a more eye-opening experience or gained more respect for the women who had the strength and courage to attempt to emerge from this type of oppression. My newfound respect towards people in Afghanistan, specifically women, comes from realizing how many struggles they must overcome that I have not had to worry about. Being a woman of different ethnicities, the message of this book really hit home. By reading this I now have a greater understanding of diverse cultures and a better appreciation for my own unique, multicultural background. My father and mother both instilled in me a sense of pride for who I am. I believe that because I am multiracial and have experienced firsthand my father's Salvadoran culture I can bring cultural understanding and diversity to the University of Michigan.