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Hi every one, I am writing an essay about fraudulents. If you do correction my prompt academically, I will be glad. Thank you.

banking frauds

I am interested in solving any tangled problems, and I am the best one at it. Fraudulents are occurred frequently in our bank and one of them is to increase the profit of the bank. This is related to a system that promotes management team gets paid higher reward when bank's profits are higher. Once, I detected that there is a kind of fraud which is artificial profit during the financial statements auditing and I stopped immediately this offense.