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Name: Hana Hutabarat
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Aug 19, 2018
Writing Feedback / Before entering college many young people are advised that a year working or traveling is good thing [3]

a gap year - an option for students



Hello, all..
This is my first time join this comunity And also write my essay here. Can you help me to give comment for my essay? Thanks before.

Some countries, young people are encouraged to work or Travel for a year between finishing high school And before starting universities. Discuss the advantages And disadvantages, give your opinion?

It is agreed that before entering on college many young people are adviced that a year working or traveling may be a good option. This essay will suggestion that saving money is the biggest positive aspect of this And a reduced Motivation to study is the primary disadvantage.

Studying In university is quite expensive And many student decide to work for twelve months And save up money before they begin their studies In next level. This allows than to pay for their living cost, tuitition fees, acomodation And focus on their studies, rather thanks struggle financially or have to get a part of time job on top their academic work. For example, many cases that average student In university especially In Indonesia, requires over 1.5 milions per month just to survive and many drop out because they cannot afford to stay.

Despite these merit, many student often get used working or traveling And do not want to return to a life of study after a year off. This is short term view can cause some bypass university altogether And go straight into a job. That is beneath than capabilities or may not often the same prospects their future career night done. For example : some young people, Will be feel comfortable with their activity as a worker In a company because they think career progretion better than back to study In university. Moreover, they have accepted salary for their effort while working In the company.

Based on the argument, it can be taken conclusion that taking a break from studies can be advantagenous if it allows people to gather up savings. However, they should also be careful that it dress not lend to disillusionment with Education altogether.

Thank you.
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