havy1401
Sep 6, 2018
Writing Feedback / It is true that most people are likely to choose high-paying jobs - IELTS TASK 2 [3]
agree that salary can be the major reasons => ... one of the major reasons
go abroad on the holidays =>>> ... on holiday
Your conclusion sounds wierd to me. I ưould write "While I agree that salary is one of the top priorities..., I also belive that other factors are equally crucial."
agree that salary can be the major reasons => ... one of the major reasons
go abroad on the holidays =>>> ... on holiday
Your conclusion sounds wierd to me. I ưould write "While I agree that salary is one of the top priorities..., I also belive that other factors are equally crucial."