Ly Huyen Tran
Sep 18, 2018
Writing Feedback / IELTS PART 1:...how selected age groups bought concert, cinema and theatre tickets online [2]
I've just stared practicing IELTS Writing Task so I hope that everyone can take a look at my writing and give me as many as feedback as possible. Thank you very much!!!
The charts below show how selected age groups bought concert, cinema and theatre tickets online over the first three months of 2013 in three countries and how the Internet was accessed. Summarize the information ...
The charts presented how two different ranges of age used the internet and which type of devices were mostly used in order to buy concert, cinema and theatre tickets in the first quarter of 2013 in Australia, UK and Malaysia.
It was clear that in UK and Australia there were more young people (age of 25-44) bought tickets on the internet than the older group (age of 65 and above), approximately 55%. In contrast, both groups in Malaysia had about 45% of tickets were bought online and the older group was slightly higher than the young one.
In term of internet accessing devices, desktop computer was the most popular, with over 60%. Following by laptop with nearly 45% in Australia and Malaysia and about 30% in UK. And lastly, mobile phone was the least common devices with only 30% in Malaysia and lower in Australia and UK.
In conclusion, most of young people buy tickets online and desktop computer was the device that was used most.
I've just stared practicing IELTS Writing Task so I hope that everyone can take a look at my writing and give me as many as feedback as possible. Thank you very much!!!
The charts below show how selected age groups bought concert, cinema and theatre tickets online over the first three months of 2013 in three countries and how the Internet was accessed. Summarize the information ...
different ways of buying tickets
The charts presented how two different ranges of age used the internet and which type of devices were mostly used in order to buy concert, cinema and theatre tickets in the first quarter of 2013 in Australia, UK and Malaysia.
It was clear that in UK and Australia there were more young people (age of 25-44) bought tickets on the internet than the older group (age of 65 and above), approximately 55%. In contrast, both groups in Malaysia had about 45% of tickets were bought online and the older group was slightly higher than the young one.
In term of internet accessing devices, desktop computer was the most popular, with over 60%. Following by laptop with nearly 45% in Australia and Malaysia and about 30% in UK. And lastly, mobile phone was the least common devices with only 30% in Malaysia and lower in Australia and UK.
In conclusion, most of young people buy tickets online and desktop computer was the device that was used most.
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