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Name: Rupsa Saha
Joined: Oct 18, 2018
Last Post: Oct 19, 2018
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rupsajina   
Oct 18, 2018
Writing Feedback / Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. [2]

Owning a business that means they could can follow their passion, find work motivation from interest be self-motivated, as well as ...

Secondly, it will be difficult for them... -> This is not really a different point from the "work more hours" mentioned in the first 2 sentences of the paragraph

and they will also have to take more show their responsibilities to towards ...
They will have ...

and make it will be a lot ... good work- life balance as well as , and not let the work take ...

Working for an employer let not only lets you take not only fewer responsibilities

Despite of irrefutable advantages of (or Inspite of irrefutable...)

Also, just a general comment, you have put only one paragraph supporting the stand you took (professional employee), but 2 paragraphs on the opposite stand. Maybe you can rewrite it, with the same points, but such that it feels like 2 paragraphs supporting your stand, and one paragraph of why you don not support the other one.
rupsajina   
Oct 18, 2018
Graduate / Motivation Letter for Phd at European Universities in Natural Language Processing [4]

I am planning on sending out applications for my PhD, and most require a letter of motivation. Can you please help me with the language/structure, since I have never done this before? Also, is this much enough? Or do I need to write more? How do I sign off on the letter?

Letter of Motivation
Applicant for PhD in Natural Language Processing

I am Rupsa Saha and I am applying for Doctorate in Natural Language Processing. I have been engaged as a Researcher at Tata Consultancy Services for the last two years.

My first experience with NLP was through my Master of Technology at CollegeName, India. Although my research was on Multimodal Brain Tumour Segmentation using Rough Sets, I also contributed to a project for the Indian Navy on translating natural language queries to structured queries.

The two years assured me that not only can I carry out individual research, I enjoy it. While I would not be so bold to consider myself a "good researcher", I am definitely a happy one.

I joined my current company as an NLP researcher immediately on finishing post-graduation, one of two students from the batch of forty-seven to go on to a research position. At present, I work on ontology expansion, supervised learning using sparse data, relationship extraction, and information mining. Most of the data sources are long and short texts from the World Wide Web, across various domains including automobile, finance, crime.

Academic research prepared me to not get frustrated with an umpteenth number of unexpected results. The industrial research experience equips me to present the details of my investigations to be understandable by all. Thanks to organisational support, I have also presented papers and interacted with people internationally at conferences.

NLP and Computational Linguistics offer a vast array of research problems. Some that pique my interest are: relation extraction (especially causal relations), text summarization across multiple sources, devising methods to bootstrap a domain-specific ontology from limited data.

Apart from my (short) research experience, I also bring considerable coding experience in Python/R/Java. Coding has been a passion right from my schooldays

My primary goal in pursuing a PhD at CollegeName is to find myself in an innovative research environment. The guidance of professors at a place like CollegeName would help me grow as a researcher and contribute to the NLP community. Given the diverse nature of the research at the LabName group and my existing skill set, I am confident I can be a productive member.
rupsajina   
Oct 18, 2018
Writing Feedback / Common App essay about my experience volunteering in a hospital and how it influenced me [2]

They would stare at us ...

huge satisfaction down in my heart.

But people can get emotionall emotional at nights night

After ... meals for a over several days, a lack of not being able to sleep, and being yelled from at by unwelcoming ...

At 15, the youngest age I am the youngest among all the volunteers

... any significant differences difference?

... Chinese dialect besides different from my dialect Mandarin

I continue to ... our volunteering in My internal struggle continues as we volunteer the next day at the dialysis center

An elderly woman's hands begin to shakholds on me tightly with her shaking hands, eyes wide open ... face. , yet holding tightly to my hand

... about how joyful happy she is

Not even her own family came had not come to see her even once

Before As I am about to leave

she softly asked me quietly to sing a song for her, as if she is was afraid of ...

Neverthless, that The Ā mà I met that day teaches taught me that even though my contribution is small, I still have just the ability ... This thought can bring brings me fulfillment to them and the hope that ... do something worthwhile.

Similarily, In my childhood, I used to ...

The reality indeed crushed my ...

However, After ... a summer and having the experience at the hospital, I learned that it could can be hard ..., either whether it is in Taiwanese or English, but it couldn't cannot stop

As soon as I return returned to the U.S, ... I have gone on to become becoming the President ... club at school(?), and even assissted assisting the city's ...

... I found a place to have a my voice.

... a more just and verdant world

... passion and advanced knowlege of psychology I studied in from college, ... like Ā mà to go through ... presented find their life's challenges a little easier, and ultimately ...
rupsajina   
Oct 19, 2018
Graduate / Motivation Letter for Phd at European Universities in Natural Language Processing [4]

@Holt, Thank you for the pointers, looks like I got the whole idea wrong. Do let me know if the following structure is more appropriate:

par 1 : why i want to study in the college
par 2 : current research work
par 3 : research I would like to carry out
par 4 : college/qualifications that are relevant
par 5 : purpose of my studies (i.e. my existing letter shortened down by a lot)

Also, should i put in why I find the subject fascinating? Or is that too cliched and cheesy?
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