Scholarship / Career Plan - Sukuk for Infrastructure Development - CHEVENING ESSAY [3]

Hi,

Here's my opinion, hope this helps.

IMO, your essay really strong in explaining the current situation of your current industry where you work at.

However, i think you may add more concrete details about what will you do when you stated this sentence
"... I am eager to be a part of the execution team"

Good luck

Cheers,