Graduate / Motivation Letter for Structural Engineering Graduate Program [3]

Thank you so much! I decided not to use that opening. I'm writing more simple letter. Could you tell me what do you think about this draft? It's not finished by the way, I'm still working on other paragraphs.

My name is *, and I am a Civil Engineering graduate from *University, *, Turkey. I am writing to express my interest and enthusiasm in applying for the MSc program of "*Engineering" at the Technical University of *for the 2019 Summer term.

The foundation of my interest in this field lies in my childhood days I spent with my father. He had a construction company and I frequently accompanied for his construction site visits. Every time I visited the site I was spending hours watching the machines and related processes with a child's curiosity and excitement. Growing up in this environment has let me know what I enjoy most and what I want to become.

I pursued my undergraduate degree in Civil Engineering at a reputed University in engineering branches. During my under graduation, I gained my initial formal exposure to methods for the design and calculation of systems through courses like "Structural Analysis" and "Computer Application in Civil Engineering", which opened my vision to the latest construction technology and design methods.

In the second year of my under graduation, I received in-depth practical experience during the construction site practice during which, I was a part of a building inspection company named *. I took upon the task of making a study of testing of concrete samples taken from buildings and writing detailed reports. This hands-on experience gave me my first opportunity to apply the technical knowledge that I had obtained from the coursework. I also had the chance to observe the practical difficulties of working on a construction site.