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Name: Mandy Ma
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School: Zhe Jiang University

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Jan 10, 2019
Letters / Resume for Applying MBA in Canada [2]

ConsecratedOperations Manager: do you mean Dedicated?
to successfully lower costs: I think successfully should be deleted.
the highlights part is very confusing, it contains both your job responsibilities and your skills.
ordering supply weekly base on sale forecast: this is very confusing.

Only for your reference, I am not a native speaker, either.
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