stephskk
Oct 1, 2009
Undergraduate / "find fulfillment in helping others" Looking for critiques on UC admission essay [7]
Overall, It's a fairly well written essay, but you should focus on how this changed you as a person. You should share with the school how much of a stronger person you have become through this experience.
Overall, It's a fairly well written essay, but you should focus on how this changed you as a person. You should share with the school how much of a stronger person you have become through this experience.