kahlan
Oct 3, 2009
Writing Feedback / Students should not get marriage while they are still studing [3]
Marriage is the institution that man and woman are joined in special kind of social dependence . However the education is fundamental for everyone .Therefore we cannot get happy life without marriage and education as well. I strongly agree with this topic "student should not get marriage while they are still studying".I believe that students are not ready for serious commitment such as marriage, are not financially independent , and will lose their focus on their academic pursuits.
First of all, marriage comes with many responsibilities and the most important qualities of marriage are the understanding and love between couple. On the other hand , some students have no ideas regarding of marriage's facts. Thus, the misunderstanding occurs and the marriage may fail immediately .
Admittedly, thr education is very complex and difficult especially after high school so the students should spend a lot of times in their studying.For example, if the students want to get good grades , they should study hard and concentrate.Therefor, if they have wives ,undoubtedly they will think about their families and wives .However , the will spend alot of times because they should stay and ralex with their families . Hence , the marriage is not compulsory for them during study time .
Finally,expenses of marriage will obstruct couple's life . Actually, requirements of marriage are very expensive such as houes, cars, ... etc.
However , students' salaries not enough for all houeshold especailly the students that who study outside their countries .On the other hand , students must spend money to their universities ,books, as well as their families.So they will meet many problems with marriage .
In comparison with some people that who encourage their cultures. They believe that marriage enhances person's morality.However, I believe that students have other priorities while they study.
To sum up,marriage and study play an important role in the life of human.
For all clarification above ,the students should not get marriage early because they cannot depend for themselves, their life bases on some aims for the future, and they have to study more and more.
please .send me my error . thank for everyone .
Marriage is the institution that man and woman are joined in special kind of social dependence . However the education is fundamental for everyone .Therefore we cannot get happy life without marriage and education as well. I strongly agree with this topic "student should not get marriage while they are still studying".I believe that students are not ready for serious commitment such as marriage, are not financially independent , and will lose their focus on their academic pursuits.
First of all, marriage comes with many responsibilities and the most important qualities of marriage are the understanding and love between couple. On the other hand , some students have no ideas regarding of marriage's facts. Thus, the misunderstanding occurs and the marriage may fail immediately .
Admittedly, thr education is very complex and difficult especially after high school so the students should spend a lot of times in their studying.For example, if the students want to get good grades , they should study hard and concentrate.Therefor, if they have wives ,undoubtedly they will think about their families and wives .However , the will spend alot of times because they should stay and ralex with their families . Hence , the marriage is not compulsory for them during study time .
Finally,expenses of marriage will obstruct couple's life . Actually, requirements of marriage are very expensive such as houes, cars, ... etc.
However , students' salaries not enough for all houeshold especailly the students that who study outside their countries .On the other hand , students must spend money to their universities ,books, as well as their families.So they will meet many problems with marriage .
In comparison with some people that who encourage their cultures. They believe that marriage enhances person's morality.However, I believe that students have other priorities while they study.
To sum up,marriage and study play an important role in the life of human.
For all clarification above ,the students should not get marriage early because they cannot depend for themselves, their life bases on some aims for the future, and they have to study more and more.
please .send me my error . thank for everyone .