Ronitsingh1405
Aug 19, 2019
Undergraduate / MIT Essay : Cultural Background and Identity. Essay Evaluation [2]
I am from India. A country known for its diversity and unique culture that has shaped me into a unique individual that I am proud of. I was born in Bihar in a small town 'Kahalgaon'. Both my parents are from small villages. Having born in northern India, I have spent most of my life in Southern states of India. Being a Hindu, I have been taught to be very respectful of family values. With so many languages spoken, I am fluent in Hindi, English, Kannada, Tamil, Bhojpuri and Angika. I feel India is a combination of different countries. I grew up hearing and listening to my elder ones on what is right and wrong. It's a generation of morals that I carry with me and refer to constantly, sometimes without even realizing it.
Can someone help me make this essay better in terms of ideas and vocabulary.
born in multicultural india
I am from India. A country known for its diversity and unique culture that has shaped me into a unique individual that I am proud of. I was born in Bihar in a small town 'Kahalgaon'. Both my parents are from small villages. Having born in northern India, I have spent most of my life in Southern states of India. Being a Hindu, I have been taught to be very respectful of family values. With so many languages spoken, I am fluent in Hindi, English, Kannada, Tamil, Bhojpuri and Angika. I feel India is a combination of different countries. I grew up hearing and listening to my elder ones on what is right and wrong. It's a generation of morals that I carry with me and refer to constantly, sometimes without even realizing it.
Can someone help me make this essay better in terms of ideas and vocabulary.
