Stevo99c
Oct 8, 2009
Essays / Help on inclass essay (my future career goals) [8]
Hey,
I have to do an in-class on my future career goals. I have to make a strong thesis statement to start things off but I'm not sure how I would go about making one for a personal essay.
I want to
-become a private school teacher
-coach hockey and lacrosse (at school and outside)
-support my family and spend time
-maybe work with hockey organization somewhere
can you help me with a first paragraph please?
Thanks
Hey,
I have to do an in-class on my future career goals. I have to make a strong thesis statement to start things off but I'm not sure how I would go about making one for a personal essay.
I want to
-become a private school teacher
-coach hockey and lacrosse (at school and outside)
-support my family and spend time
-maybe work with hockey organization somewhere
can you help me with a first paragraph please?
Thanks