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Feb 28, 2020
Writing Feedback / Do you agree reading book better than playing games or watching tv for children? [2]
Dear sir and madam, I have to do ielts test next month, so I really hope everyone can unable me to write essay better. Thanks for hearing me
My essay:
In dicussion of children's educational backup, it is witnessed subjectively by someone that reading book has left more beneficial than watching television or playing computer games. Personally, I partly concur with this view but it would not be ignored to note the exceptional perks of computer games and media as well.
Intitially, it is undeniable that reading book has a positive and promissing impact on youngster, particularly science and supplementary book. Not only broaden their wisdom but these kinds of books also promote good habits for kids on a daily basis. Not to mention that, keeping us concentrated has to be remained continously during reading process, which intentionally practises patience to younger people. Hence, books have been greatly valuable fortune.
However, in the context of technological advance, media accessibility early unables children to get global and trendy look as well as tend to learn and work in dynamic environment. Abandoning negativeness of games and media in modern life, they presumably benefits for children in being flexible, active and more creative through learning and searching information within vivid pictures, realistic sounds and eye-catching interfaces on games and TV as well. Children may comprehend and remember transparently in long term. Besides, playing computer games or watching TV is also a conscious choice to release pressure effectively under studying all the time.
To sum up, hardly we can evaluate clearly which option be more exceptional but it may be proven that taking advantage of technology is a shorter and more time-saving string to link to education and even entertainment.
technology - a link to education and entertainment
Dear sir and madam, I have to do ielts test next month, so I really hope everyone can unable me to write essay better. Thanks for hearing me
My essay:
In dicussion of children's educational backup, it is witnessed subjectively by someone that reading book has left more beneficial than watching television or playing computer games. Personally, I partly concur with this view but it would not be ignored to note the exceptional perks of computer games and media as well.
Intitially, it is undeniable that reading book has a positive and promissing impact on youngster, particularly science and supplementary book. Not only broaden their wisdom but these kinds of books also promote good habits for kids on a daily basis. Not to mention that, keeping us concentrated has to be remained continously during reading process, which intentionally practises patience to younger people. Hence, books have been greatly valuable fortune.
However, in the context of technological advance, media accessibility early unables children to get global and trendy look as well as tend to learn and work in dynamic environment. Abandoning negativeness of games and media in modern life, they presumably benefits for children in being flexible, active and more creative through learning and searching information within vivid pictures, realistic sounds and eye-catching interfaces on games and TV as well. Children may comprehend and remember transparently in long term. Besides, playing computer games or watching TV is also a conscious choice to release pressure effectively under studying all the time.
To sum up, hardly we can evaluate clearly which option be more exceptional but it may be proven that taking advantage of technology is a shorter and more time-saving string to link to education and even entertainment.