Scholarship / Kindly review my Essay for AAS in Commercial law in Melbourne Law School [3]

scholarship application essay

Please:- a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connections you will gain from your scholarship. Possible tasks can be personal and/or professional; and b) list any possible constraints you think may prevent you from achieving these tasks.*:

Firstly, on completion of this study, I will have advanced knowledge in the field of commercial law especially e-commerce, e-contract, and digital consumer protection which Mongolia cannot regulate properly although there are increasing practices like e-trade of SMEs with China via Internet platforms. I will employ this knowledge and skills to create a legal framework that provides sufficient regulation of e-commercial activities by participating to draft new Commercial code and other related laws and publishing articles. But implementing these tasks can be challenging due to a lack of understanding of the problem by decision-makers, so I intend to overcome it by co-operating with Mongolian commercial chambers and other researchers.

Secondly, this study will give me knowledge of the recent development of commercial litigation in addition to digital trade law. According to the Doing Business 2020, Mongolia needs to improve its enforcing contract capacity including court structure, proceedings, and automation. So, as a manager of XXX responsible for court development, I will use my gained knowledge to develop a specialized commercial court or chambers in Mongolia and to build judges' capacity.

Lastly, I will have an advanced understanding of recent technological advances and their relevance to law after the proposed study. I will use this to initiate, develop a legal and technological basis to build e-court in Mongolia which will not only fulfill needs to decide e-commerce cases effectively but also increase court capacity to deliver services to citizens in a fair, timely and efficient manner. However, there might be a budget deficit and lack of technical knowledge to execute my last two tasks, so, I mitigate these by finding International donor funding.

To implement these tasks, I will use my networks to invite Australian professors and court practitioners to Mongolia to give lectures on improving e-commercial law and e-court. And I will give my effort to extend two countries network by establishing relationship between Australian and Mongolian courts.

Scholarship / Scholarship Essay for Australia Awards 1. Explaining University of Melbourne choice [3]

Dear all,

I'm a officer of Supreme court responsible of court development,
Please kindly review and give me feedback for the Australia Awards.
Thank you in advance.

Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

I chose the University of Melbourne because it offers a Master of Commercial laws course. I will learn about recent legal issues of electronically made transactions, digital consumer protection, FinTech, and cryptocurrency and how to receive those cases electronically in court which directly relates to the weakness of Mongolian court due to lack of knowledge and skills of applying those new areas of law in court effectively.

Of particular interest to me are the courses in electronic commercial law which will help me build upon my existing training and skills in improving court organization and introducing technological advances in court. As my main duties relate to improving the legal environment of litigation, and management of courts, I will use this knowledge and skills to develop new legal provisions accepting e-litigation, evaluating electronically created evidence in court and handling commercial cases created in the Internet environment across borders, as well as, to actively participate creating legal regulation on electronic commercial law which doesn't have any regulations in Mongolia.

My backup choice is the University of New South Wales (UNSW) because it offers Master of Laws (LLM) in Corporate, Commercial & Taxation Law. This course will help me understand not only the main issues of e-transactions laws, but also recent development in commercial law and litigation. In particular those subjects on Globalization and commercial law, Complex commercial litigation will sharpen my knowledge of contemporary global investment governance, effective case management requirements and techniques, and fundamental international conventions.

Since Mongolian court suffers from a lack of required knowledge applying international commercial law conventions at the national level, I will employ my newly gained knowledge and skill of commercial law to build a capacity of Mongolian judges on improving the use of international conventions through developing training module and organize workshops regularly.