Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing 1 Hydroelectric power station [3]


overall, you have arranged a good essay structure. however, you need to learn more about vocabulary.
in the first paragraph, you mentioned 'utilize' for twice. actually you can use another synonym such as apply (C1). for the second paragraph, I think the word 'reveal' seems like it has no collocation for this essay's theme.

maybe the others would give you another feedback. I hope it helps.

Writing Feedback / [IELTS] In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people.. [3]

hello @lana9598

overall, you have a good essay structure and a lot of specific words to support your opinion which could boost your lexical resources
however, I found several silly mistakes on your spelling, such as 'enviroment > environment', 'harmfull > harmful', and 'habbits > habits'

I hope it helps, keep writing!