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Jun 30, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS WT 1 practice about coffee and bananas sale by particular company [2]
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I would also like to know what others ways i can paraphrase the amount of money, such as 3 million euros.
The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade's coffee and bananas in two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in three out of five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of selling on these two products.
In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at 3 million European dollars, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in UK, at 15 million European dollars. By 2004, however, sales of Fairtrade coffee in UK had risen to 20 million euros, and this was over three times higher than Switzerland's sales for coffee that year, which had doubled. The same year in 2004 also can see the dramatic increase in the money traded on Fairtrade bananas in the UK, Switzerland, and Denmark, with incomes rising by EUR 32 million, 4.5 million, and 3.4 million respectively.
Sales of the two Fairtrade products were far lower in Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in sales of Fairtrade coffee can be seen, but revenue remained at euros 2 million or below in bananas actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
Hello, I am really appreciate to anyone whom help to repair my writing. Thank you.
I would also like to know what others ways i can paraphrase the amount of money, such as 3 million euros.
Sales of Fairtrade-labelled Coffee and Bananas in 1999 and 2004
The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade's coffee and bananas in two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in three out of five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of selling on these two products.
In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at 3 million European dollars, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in UK, at 15 million European dollars. By 2004, however, sales of Fairtrade coffee in UK had risen to 20 million euros, and this was over three times higher than Switzerland's sales for coffee that year, which had doubled. The same year in 2004 also can see the dramatic increase in the money traded on Fairtrade bananas in the UK, Switzerland, and Denmark, with incomes rising by EUR 32 million, 4.5 million, and 3.4 million respectively.
Sales of the two Fairtrade products were far lower in Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in sales of Fairtrade coffee can be seen, but revenue remained at euros 2 million or below in bananas actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
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