Writing Feedback / The number completed projects [4]

Hi, I have a comment on your essay, hope you will find it helpful. In the introduction of your writing, number 03 should be written as three. Besides, when it comes to completed projects, past tense should be used. In addition, the sentence:"the figure for Lao PDR highest" lacks verb.

Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1: people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain [5]

Hi, I have some comments on your essay and I hope it'll be helpful. You can use the number of people, tourists, visitors to avoid repeating word "people". You can also replace "chose to go", "went to" by visited, came to