shenkangchao
Oct 19, 2009
Graduate / 'theoretical and experiential learning' - essay about Accomplishment-MBA program [3]
Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the XXX MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. XXX, Director of MBA Admissions.
Dear Mr. XXX,
If you are seeking a student that could diverse the school, an entrepreneur who could impact the business world, or a leader that could change the world, I would appreciate to discuss your needs and objectives. The accomplishments noted in the bellowing illustrate the value and needs I can bring to the school:
- Designed and developed an e-solution for XXX Corporation to resolve number and card resources management, resulting in multi million dollars savings for the company.
- Co-organize a donation campaign in my community to raise funds for kids in XXX, a shelter that adopts children whose parents are criminals in prison
- Successfully finished my master degree overseas.
One major accomplishment recently is that I organized a donation campaign in my community to raise funds for kids in XXX, a shelter that adopts children whose parents are criminals in prison. When I first saw the situation in XXX, I decided to do something for the kids there. So I wrote a vivid story about XXX and put it on the community website. It got hundreds replies quickly. Then I organized a trip to XXX with about 40 neighbors in my community. To make more contribution, we start a donation campaign to raise money for kids and we found XXX to sponsor for it. Although now I am gradually back out the campaign due to work schedule and MBA application, more and more people are joining in and make their contributions.
As a skilled solution architect with an outstanding background in successful technology and e-business projects, I set myself a goal that starts my own investment business on supporting small high tech companies. After three years working in XXX, I then realized that what I am doing now is turning me into an IT specialist. I have become aware that engineering training has not prepared me adequately to deal with the broad strategic questions. I need a professional training to sharpen my leadership and decision skills and broaden my perspective of management. So I turned to MBA.
As my aim is to run a successful investment company, I look forward to the opportunity to participate in a program, in which students not only discuss and analyze issues, but also practice leadership skills in seminars and workshops and solve actual problems. The XXX's mens et manus reflects the school's commitment to theoretical and experiential learning. That's where I want to refine my leadership abilities.
I would appreciate an interview to discuss the objectives and needs of the school and the ways I could contribute. Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the XXX MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. XXX, Director of MBA Admissions.
Dear Mr. XXX,
If you are seeking a student that could diverse the school, an entrepreneur who could impact the business world, or a leader that could change the world, I would appreciate to discuss your needs and objectives. The accomplishments noted in the bellowing illustrate the value and needs I can bring to the school:
- Designed and developed an e-solution for XXX Corporation to resolve number and card resources management, resulting in multi million dollars savings for the company.
- Co-organize a donation campaign in my community to raise funds for kids in XXX, a shelter that adopts children whose parents are criminals in prison
- Successfully finished my master degree overseas.
One major accomplishment recently is that I organized a donation campaign in my community to raise funds for kids in XXX, a shelter that adopts children whose parents are criminals in prison. When I first saw the situation in XXX, I decided to do something for the kids there. So I wrote a vivid story about XXX and put it on the community website. It got hundreds replies quickly. Then I organized a trip to XXX with about 40 neighbors in my community. To make more contribution, we start a donation campaign to raise money for kids and we found XXX to sponsor for it. Although now I am gradually back out the campaign due to work schedule and MBA application, more and more people are joining in and make their contributions.
As a skilled solution architect with an outstanding background in successful technology and e-business projects, I set myself a goal that starts my own investment business on supporting small high tech companies. After three years working in XXX, I then realized that what I am doing now is turning me into an IT specialist. I have become aware that engineering training has not prepared me adequately to deal with the broad strategic questions. I need a professional training to sharpen my leadership and decision skills and broaden my perspective of management. So I turned to MBA.
As my aim is to run a successful investment company, I look forward to the opportunity to participate in a program, in which students not only discuss and analyze issues, but also practice leadership skills in seminars and workshops and solve actual problems. The XXX's mens et manus reflects the school's commitment to theoretical and experiential learning. That's where I want to refine my leadership abilities.
I would appreciate an interview to discuss the objectives and needs of the school and the ways I could contribute. Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely,