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Posts by Ngocngo
Name: Ngọc
Joined: Jan 25, 2021
Last Post: Feb 19, 2021
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From: Viet Nam
School: HOANG QUOC VIET

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Ngocngo   
Jan 25, 2021
Writing Feedback / In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than renting one [5]

This is the first time I write it. Please give me some comment. I'm waiting for it.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.


Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than hiring one. In my oppinion, I partly agree with this idea.
Generally, people always want to possess a home. They constanly have in their mind that latch on home which means significantly: you are financially independent, grow up. Morever, if you own a home is abandon. You can do what you want. You freedomly paint your wall with your favourite colour. Celabrate everything flow your imagination. Other way, when you rent a apartmen, you will have to obey the rule. Some rules make you uncomfortable. You can't sing loud or maybe you can't have pets. Doing everything without host's permission, it's so great!

Another perspective, renting a home which is not waste much expense as you pay for bying a home or building it. But you also have from pretty house onwards big house. In addition, you never worry about any phenomeno destroy your dear house such as natural disaster. Beside, renting a home is flexibility when you work in many places. You are not anxious about market crashing.

To conclusion, Having own house is important for some countries. In my view, i prefer owning a home because when in my home I am I and I don't have to endure something I don't like.
Ngocngo   
Feb 19, 2021
Writing Feedback / In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than renting one [5]

@Holt
Thank u so much.I change my thread that remove "I partly agree with this idea." and insert "this is a positive situation." My conclusion : "To conclusion, Having own house is important for some countries. That absolutely positive situation. In my view, i prefer owning a home because when in my home I am I and I don't have to endure something I don't like.". Is that ok ? And I try to redo my thread aproach to 250 words.
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