Scholarship / Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc.. [3]

Hello
hope you are doing well!
I need help checking the motivation letter for my scholarship application.....
Small background i applied for studies in the fields of: industrial analytics, robotics and control, sustainable energy engineering and intelligent automation

i am required to submit one motivation letter of a 1000 characters for all the porgrammes i applied for. the essay is on question and answer format and has only the following question...

application letter

Question : Describe how you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your time in Sweden in your organisation/company and/or in your home country/region upon your return from Sweden.

[Maximum 1000 characters incl. spaces]

Answer:

Technology is reshaping the world. Through my master's and NFGL platform I will gain knowledge in engineering and technology, develop my leadership skills, network and exchange knowledge with experts.

Employing my knowledge in Sudan:

In industrial systems and robotics by utilizing robots to monitor Agriculture fields which will foster healthy soil and optimize yields. Also, by utilizing automation in production, harvesting, washing, extraction, testing tasks can be Automated minimizing time energy and costs.

In sustainable energy by employing solar energy to power homes, ICT systems, and light roads which will foster sustainable environment, buildings, infrastructure, and affordable energy, food and water for all

All are linked to the UN SDGs 2030 goals 2,7,8,9,12,13,15