Scholarship / "My academic objectives, long-range goals & why particular college". --- College Scholarship Essay [2]

Hey everyone,
I am applying to a university undergraduate scholarship program. Kindly, help me review my essay. The question or the prompt is:

Prompt 1: Describe your academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals. Please include specifically how a Bachelor's degree from the University of (xyz) will contribute to your achieving your longer-range goals. (100 word maximum)

My response is as follows:
Response 1: As an enthusiastic computer scientist, I am looking forward to delving deep into the world of AI & ML as a CS student at the University of (xyz). After four years of high school Computer Science, Math, and other engineering-related courses, a bachelor's degree will not only forge a solid academic foundation but also help gain the relevant skills & ample work experience. Integrating university resources with my passion for problem-solving will fuel my dream of leading a tech company & my long-term goal of becoming a tech entrepreneur that pushes the world towards innovation to solve contemporary problems.