Undergraduate / This is the place where I want to be - Fashion Institute of Technology Admittance Essay [5]

I would delete the "I dont know If I am the perfect candidate." This essay is about pitching yourself to FIT. Even if you feel as if you are not qualified to be in the school it should not be mentioned in the essay. The essay is about "selling yourself" as a great fit and someone who will do well at FIT. By stating this in the essay you are already letting the admissions know that you are not fit to be in the school. Write the essay as if you know you are the perfect candidate for this school, don't sell yourself short. Focus more on what drives you to be an artist and your devotion to your work.