janedoe
Nov 29, 2009
Undergraduate / Diverse Earth - Help with Rutgers College Essay! [5]
This is a great start, but I would try to elaborate more. You only share a little about yourself, and your Indian/Hindu heritage. I know the application is due tomorrow (I'm applying to Rutgers, too!), but if you have more time, I'd consider integrating more about yourself as well as strengthening the connection at the end between Rutgers and your background.
This is a great start, but I would try to elaborate more. You only share a little about yourself, and your Indian/Hindu heritage. I know the application is due tomorrow (I'm applying to Rutgers, too!), but if you have more time, I'd consider integrating more about yourself as well as strengthening the connection at the end between Rutgers and your background.