Undergraduate / "Characteristics of a doctor" Brooklyn B.A.-M.D. Program Essay [5]

i just want to tell you that there are two essay topics and the two essays together have to be four pages...

in that case, the essay is fine in length in length

i dont know if this helps but i think you should talk more about yourself instead of the people in your life...

for example, you can talk about how you are affected by Dr. Marcantonio's work and the experiences you had that helped you determine you want a career in medicine...

hope this helps