gkuizinas
Dec 14, 2009
Undergraduate / Common application (my IT skills) [2]
Which of these texts is the best? Or aren't they good at all. They aren't gramatically perfect, though I am asking about the contents. If they are so bad, how should I try to elaborate an essay like that?
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).
In the period from 10th grade to 12th I have decided to elaborate my IT skills on more academic fields. Since then it was thesaurus, online school newspaper & essays shop that I have developed. As though it would be not enough, I got inspiration as they became more and more known and I had to spend time probably not reasonable for scholar extracurricular activities. However, expected or not, my academic achievements didn't go down; ironically they went skyrocket up having in mind the time I spend "learning". Seems like while collecting database for thesaurus, my Lithuanian language dictionary expanded colossally and while writing articles for newspaper and reviewing essays for mistakes I learned more and more vivid information then ever which helped me latter, during the test works. My guess is that I think it was then that I understood the power of liberal arts.
This is not an activity upon which I have briefly discussed in a previous data, though it was of significant meaning. It has happened on December, 2009; together with a girl in the class we have given a project for school musical play on send-off occasion. I remember all the small stuff I had to do: organize the original script of the Queens WWRY, translate it, design the awarding medal for school-leavers. On 10 February 2009, 6:00 PM the show has started. The moment curtains had dropped my interview for ROTARY scholarship was over. Ironically, I was the only person not to see the show & the camera man forgot to turn on the recorder. I guess what I have learned here was that it is not important to be the man in the spotlight to be happy. Sometimes it's good feeling just to read about what you have done.
After I have turned Art school for exact sciences, naturally many things had to change. You'd think that it would be a breeding-ground for programming to finally take over any other interests, and yet nothing of the kind has happened. It turned out that while in mathematicians school I've began to participate in more vivid range of contest and then, surprisingly, new surroundings helped me to understand the value of what I have been thought. I have begun surprising my friends with presents of my own creation, while school administration thanked me for each award that I brought to school. And as for today, various forms of art I try to attune while working or doing algebra. Imagine how much I have saved since 10th grade on pairs of compasses.
Which of these texts is the best? Or aren't they good at all. They aren't gramatically perfect, though I am asking about the contents. If they are so bad, how should I try to elaborate an essay like that?
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).
In the period from 10th grade to 12th I have decided to elaborate my IT skills on more academic fields. Since then it was thesaurus, online school newspaper & essays shop that I have developed. As though it would be not enough, I got inspiration as they became more and more known and I had to spend time probably not reasonable for scholar extracurricular activities. However, expected or not, my academic achievements didn't go down; ironically they went skyrocket up having in mind the time I spend "learning". Seems like while collecting database for thesaurus, my Lithuanian language dictionary expanded colossally and while writing articles for newspaper and reviewing essays for mistakes I learned more and more vivid information then ever which helped me latter, during the test works. My guess is that I think it was then that I understood the power of liberal arts.
This is not an activity upon which I have briefly discussed in a previous data, though it was of significant meaning. It has happened on December, 2009; together with a girl in the class we have given a project for school musical play on send-off occasion. I remember all the small stuff I had to do: organize the original script of the Queens WWRY, translate it, design the awarding medal for school-leavers. On 10 February 2009, 6:00 PM the show has started. The moment curtains had dropped my interview for ROTARY scholarship was over. Ironically, I was the only person not to see the show & the camera man forgot to turn on the recorder. I guess what I have learned here was that it is not important to be the man in the spotlight to be happy. Sometimes it's good feeling just to read about what you have done.
After I have turned Art school for exact sciences, naturally many things had to change. You'd think that it would be a breeding-ground for programming to finally take over any other interests, and yet nothing of the kind has happened. It turned out that while in mathematicians school I've began to participate in more vivid range of contest and then, surprisingly, new surroundings helped me to understand the value of what I have been thought. I have begun surprising my friends with presents of my own creation, while school administration thanked me for each award that I brought to school. And as for today, various forms of art I try to attune while working or doing algebra. Imagine how much I have saved since 10th grade on pairs of compasses.