Scholarship / 'a job as a construction manager' - career goal essay for scholarships [2]

I need to write an essay on my career goals for scholarships. This is what I've done so far...help if you can.

My goal is to attain a rewarding career in the field of construction management. I love to run heavy equipment and did consider attending Penn College in the operations major of heavy equipment. After doing some research, I felt that now, and probably for the next 15 years or so, operating the heavy equipment would be okay on my body but after I get some years on my body, I would rather be in the management area of the construction sites so I have decided to obtain a degree in Construction Management (BCM).

With the instruction and experience I plan to obtain from Penn College in this career choice, I feel that I will be able to achieve a successful career in this area of expertise. My goals are to be to plan and organize construction sites, prepare bid documents, contracts, and proposals. Another goal I hope to gain is to be able to supervise safe job sites and possess the interpersonal skills and ethics to provide the leadership needed in the management field.

I will be very focused in my studies and I am very committed to fulfilling my goals. To that end, I will push myself in all ways to succeed and graduate so as to fulfill my goal of attaining a job as a construction manager.

Undergraduate / 'PSECU credit unions' - people helping people essay [2]

Need some advice quickly for essay to be mailed no later than Friday... here it is..

How will furthering my education allow me to put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action?

By furthering my education, I will obtain a well deserved and well paying job in the construction management field which I will have studied and worked very hard to achieve. By obtaining this well paying job in construction management, I will be able to deposit money into my PSECU account which will, in turn, put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action.

What will make this happen is me, and every other member of the credit union, utilizing all of the services available to each of us. This will enable the credit union to extend and offer better interest rates for savings accounts, certificates of deposit, mortgages, unsecured and secured credit lines, credit cards, and personal loans and, also, no fee checking accounts.

Also, by more and more people wanting to become members because the rates are so low, this will also allow the credit union to charge very minimal, if any, services fees. And again, this should and will attract more and more people to become members.

PSECU also leads the credit unions in that they don't have overhead expenses by having many different branches and employees working at those branches. This again, leads to the low interest rates and minimal services fees charged as they have more money to be flexible with.

So, as you can see, the People Helping People" philosophy is exactly that, "People Helping People" as you help yourself and everyone else by utilizing the credit union services which are available to members.

Now, showing this to a teacher, they said that this essay should be about me and what i will do with my education....i.e., will I volunteer my construction knowledge to habitat for humanity, etc?

Not sure if I'm on the right track...