Undergraduate / Brown "advice" essay - Pickle Time [4]

Do you really have to mention that your parents set a high expectation on you? Because I just know that is not a good thing to mention in a college essay, and it sounds as if you have been driven by your parents, like this:

"My parents push me too hard --> I feel bad --> I have a pickle time --> I feel better --> My parents push me too hard again..."

Not a good thing...

So I guess you could give more details on what makes you feel bad, like problems with friends..

Correct me if it's just me feeling this way.