Undergraduate / Mocking my Chinese ethnicity - Williams Essay-Looking out the window [11]


Not at all! I've seen the uncensored version in college essays.

Good work on your essay!

Undergraduate / Tell us about a time you used your creativity...(MIT) "Acting Out Desiderata" [3]

I agree with mle2010. Amazing writing! Great use of space too.

The beginning has to be tied in with the end somehow... that really is all I can say.

Great technique; it really does shine through :)

Good luck!