Undergraduate / "Chasing A Childhood Dream" - Carnegie Mellon Supplement Essay [6]

Dude...I just wanted to say, this is really a great essay. Really, you should be proud of what you've written here. This essay shows that you're a good writter, that you're motivated, that you're smart, that you're empathetic and that you're accomplished, all without making you sound like a pompous asshole. I'm seriously in awe of how great this essay is. I'm applying to Mellon too and my essay isn't nearly as good, but I just wanted to tell you that I bet you'll get in with this one. Way to go.